Bikin introdjuse my self bentuk paragraf gimana yaa??

Introduce myself?
maka, anda disuruh membuat paragraf yang isinya memperkenalkan diri anda itu. contoh:
hello. my name is Anto. i'm 13 years old. I'm 7th grader now.  i like playing games, and reading some novels. i have one big sister, and one younger brother. I go to 5 JHS, yogyakarta. I live in yogyakarta, Indonesia. my dad is Delta M., he is a doctor. and my mother is Regina C. D., she is a house wife. I want to be an astronaut

My name is…(nama lengkap). You can call me…(nama panggilan). I was born in…(tempat lahir) at …(tanggal lahir). I am… years old(umur). I live in…(tempat tinggal). My favourite food is…(makanan kesukaan) and my favourite colour is…(warna kesukaan)