Recount text tentang pengalaman tak terlupakan (tentang ulang tahun ku)

Saya bantu sedikit saja ya selebihnya kaka bisa tambahkan:
My birthday party
 When I was 16 years old my family celebrated my birthday in a big party. I invited my best friends to attended my birthday party. 
 I was very happy because it was the best birthday in my life, there were many presents for me. My father gave me a bicycle, my mother gave me a big teddy bear which still exist till today. I thought that my friends wouldn't gave me a presents but when they entered to my house they said happy birthday to me and gave the gifts for me like novels, chocolates, ornament, etc.
 We spent the whole day in the big party but it meant the greatest party I ever had. I really enjoyed it and I’d remember that day was amazing day. 

   I remember it was last year and it was an unforgettable moment in my life. Last year on tgl-bln-tahun, I was so happy because it was my birthday. All of my classmate sang me a birthday song and bought me a cake. The cake they bought was very sweet and  has a strawberry flavor. After we ate it, We played pinata (acara pukul pukul boneka yang kalau hancur tuh keluar gula gula) and then played hide and seek. It was an unforgettable moment.